What can be done when a life consists
of a singular verb?
Pathetic punctuation
Wretched attempt at order
Miserable rhyme.
What amateur claims author?
Tangled story lines and villainous characters--
Where's the redemptive ending?
Lost in a maze of adjectives and superfluous nouns
Befouled, befuddled, beneath your concrete imagery, your "realism"?
What initiate is responsible?
For nothing can soothe
Such a well-written pain.
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