Thread Topic: Love poem
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Beka
Joined: Nov 9, '09
Status: New User |
2009-11-17 13:49:17 |
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you kissed my lips and smoothed my hair you looked in my eyes and seen whats there a soul so pure it's barely there i love your eyes and your touch i hope you know i love you much the way you look the way you smell i love you much cant you tell? When i kissed your lips and smoothed your hair i looked in your eyes and seen whats there a sould so pure its barely there you love my eyes i love yours too and i know our love is truelly pure the way i look the way i smell it drives you mad i can tell i love you so much cant you tell? and this story is all i tell. Honest opinions please?xxx |
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Unanswered Thread: Nuclear Apocalypse posted by Gumba Gumba 8 hours ago |
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Beka
Joined: Nov 9, '09
Status: New User |
2009-11-17 14:04:50 |
| if you think its crap just say or if you think its good write it down. im not sure bout it and just want to know what other peoplre think... | |
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K8bpd
Joined: Oct 25, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-17 16:15:17 |
| Its not crap...It makes me sad though cause I wish I had that kind of love in my life. | |
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unblissful
Joined: Nov 5, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-17 17:06:44 |
| i really like it!! its heaps expressive, are u able to express yourself like that in actual words or just on paper? i find it easier on paper.. i guess its hard to wear your heart on your sleeve and actually say this kind of thing to a person..? i love that other people are writing stuff!!!!! keep it up!! x | |
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Synapse
Joined: Oct 24, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-17 17:12:53 |
| WHY IS THIS HERE | |
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racyandy
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-17 21:37:14 |
| Great Stuff Beka, thanx 4 sharing. Synapse...be nice | |
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Beka
Joined: Nov 9, '09
Status: New User |
2009-11-18 08:18:13 |
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K8bpd thanks im just not too sure about it tbh so i wanted honest opinions and im sure you'll find someone soon :) unblissful thanks, yeah i say these kind of things all the time and other things like that but people look at me weird when i do. i havent showed it to the person its about though. im scared of what he'll think. i've wrote some other stuff but didnt really think they were good but i still kept them lol. Synapse its there cos i want it to be. i didnt force you to read it. racyandy thanks for sticking up for me lol. but im used to negative comments on things i write and say and do. Thanks everyone (: xxx |
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Beka
Joined: Nov 9, '09
Status: New User |
2009-11-18 08:44:15 |
| there has only ever been a few people who have saw this so i didnt know how people i didnt know would react to them so i just wanted to say thanks to you all again. it means a lot. (: xxx | |
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Unanswered Thread: Gumba da big dada posted by Gumba Gumba 9 hours ago |
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