Thread Topic: words
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unblissful
Joined: Nov 5, '09
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2009-11-09 14:33:24 |
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wrapped up in celephane a barrier hiding the contents within wearing a mask your perception misguided solid glass wont dent or crack my sacred shelter will not collapse buried secrects that lie beneath you wont find the lock and there is no key... |
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Unanswered Thread: Nothing wrong with paranoia. posted by IntroduckToni 4 hours ago |
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Synapse
Joined: Oct 24, '09
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2009-11-09 15:41:56 |
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faggot |
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Delirius
Joined: Nov 3, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-09 15:44:44 |
| Its a girl | |
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K8bpd
Joined: Oct 25, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-12 06:57:45 |
| I love poetry...its good therapy too....dont worry about what anyone says too!!!!! | |
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wowu
Joined: Sep 30, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-12 07:11:23 |
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Synapse - lesbian in that case :) but do you find this poetry too macho-like? |
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racyandy
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-12 08:33:26 |
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Synapse don't be an a--hole. It takes alot of courage to share poetry with others, that should be applauded, not condemned. Thanks for sharing Bliss, (thats my name for you k.) |
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unblissful
Joined: Nov 5, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-12 21:08:22 |
| thanx racy, its pretty cool that u stick up for me :) it only takes one person to bring you (me) down but also only one to pick me up.. means more than u wuld know.. | |
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aliveandunwell
Joined: Oct 27, '09
Status: New User |
2009-11-12 23:36:06 |
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you make me so happy i wanna slit a smile across my neck but i f---ing love you its just another trait i cant reject so please sit beside me til i breathe in my last breath and ill see you someday in the beauty that is death |
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shades of gray
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-13 06:31:27 |
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Someone once told me, lifes a wild ride, well I hear people screamin, but I hear it on the inside, so many words and Voices fillin up my head, should I go lay down? Just sit and wait for dead, as I stare off into space, pretend, pleed, beg for your sweet face, suddenly relise it was you, who left me in this place, don't you dare, do it it's ok, well fine go ahead if you wanna be that way, just some contrdictic words I seem to tell myself, all at the same time, shouting, when the only word I want is help, you see i'm fine on the outside, but I don't know my own face, as I look in the mirror, crule twist of fate, well now I'm crying, please, please, leave, but the bull horns still sounding, so many different words, yet I can't hear a thing, no sentences made, broken half way through, shouting so loud, just playin to the croud, yet there is only me, as always I'm alone, You say I have it easy, yet that's a state of mind, I have my own problems, I just keep them to myself, not trying to seek attention, symphoty, emphthy not in the best of health, physical or phycoligical, voices in my head, there they go again .... |
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K8bpd
Joined: Oct 25, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-13 07:25:07 |
| Nice work! | |
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fantasy
Joined: Jul 28, '09
Status: Senior User |
2009-11-13 08:58:23 |
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Poetry can be a great way to release emotions, and I'm glad you guys are writing, these are really great. (although to misunderstanding clueless fools we are proliferating the legend of the cliche "emo" writing bad poetry in his/her own blood. -sigh-) I also write a lot of poetry but I usually post them in my blog or journal because a lot of them are really personal :o |
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shades of gray
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-14 12:52:22 |
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That's not so personal, there's a few that really are thoe. It's not just poetry, I like little one liners that gett points across too, Like if you see things from lots off different angles it just means you got the full story. Hates still an emotion, it has to be felt to feel pains better than nothing at all were all just hiding behind masks, and if we take them off, we go unrecognised every dog needs a bit*h and every bit*h needs a dog Haha crap I know butt D: |
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K8bpd
Joined: Oct 25, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-14 12:58:11 |
| Its not crap...I need a dog!!!! lol | |
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erinro
Joined: Nov 13, '09
Status: New User |
2009-11-14 14:09:10 |
| lovely poem, unbliss | |
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shades of gray
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-14 15:35:32 |
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Haha thanks K8bpd :D read for synapse, some of my best work ... I think you'll agree ;) aha, s'all good xx |
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