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california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 03:48:25
	You guys dont even know how much this means to me! i dont care if its good or bad its just a release. i would much rather do this than cutting. damn writer's block! Burn me down Burn me down Leave the scars Take away the pain Just burn me down Let me start over Oh please, just let me start over. You lied to me You laughed at me You sat there and watched me bleed You neglected me when I was in need. Im confused You’re amused I hate you I love you im in agony im your clown please just pity me Put concrete on my ankles and let me drown suffocate me let me rise to the surface and resuscitate me let me drown let me start over oh please, just let me start over. give me mercy let death be a courtesy ill be a new person I promise ill be a new person. Bleed me out fill me back up again let this be the last breath of an old life make this my resurrecting knife leave the stains take away the mess help me escape this loneliness burn me down, let me drown, bleed me out I won’t scream or cry just let me die let me start over oh please, just let me start over.
HopeforDead Joined: Jun 16, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 03:52:33
	Whoa..... i would stay up and talk but i'm going sleepy times.. Thats amazing... (: Here is one i wrote - more of a song though. The End Is it worth it in the end? When you try and get back up and they always kick you down it'll make you regret ever coming round .. and they hold you down and test your strength they stab you with knives to see when you'll cry remove your guts then put them back in and torture you all over again!! .. there's no escape this is the end its too late.... to say goodbye They'll hurt you good make sure you don't die .. they keep you alive so you wish you were dead kick in your shins and claw at your head they cut out your eyes but you can still see they stitch your mouth closed and you watch yourself bleed .. guitar becomes louder .. .... I need you.. I need you.. .. They make sure You won't be found they watch your tears gather on the ground they laugh as you try to hold your wounds closed your guts falling out Now your eyes close.. .. the sun is going down On your last day You open your eyes But it hasn't gone away You decide to try And break free They laugh at you then you see me .. We've been apart for forever now You run towards my cage.. They come at you with rage.. I run towards you, you try break free, They're in between us They won't let us be Our fingers nearly touch.. I watch with desperate eyes, I see you start to cry.. .. And then i look down I see a fountain of blood, i try turn around but the spears in my gut My vision starts to blur I see you reach out I try to touch your hand But my body starts to die i look at you, with closing eyes, whisper "i love you" With my final sigh..
HopeforDead Joined: Jun 16, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 03:53:16
	Its a song i wrote.. i took the chords out but forgot to remove the guitar becomes louder bit..
california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 03:54:37
	thanks hope and that good1 woo im so excited!
killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Junior User	2010-09-30 05:11:07
	thats amazings thumbs up and like and 5 stars :P
HopeforDead Joined: Jun 16, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 05:25:52
	To mine or to cali's? :P
killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Junior User	2010-09-30 05:36:11
	to urs ... pff urs was s--- i joke they both are amazing i wish i could write like that ... xP
HopeforDead Joined: Jun 16, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 05:40:58
	^_^
california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 06:14:18
	Thanks killing.
california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 11:55:27
	Its crazy. I woke up at 2 am last night after a fiery and vivid dream and wrote this
1_schizo_grl Joined: Mar 15, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 13:53:54
	California & Hope Your poems are great !! What inspired you ?
california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 13:58:32
	Just feeling like God mustve accidentally given me the wronge life. Doesnt that mean i ca start over? dont i get some sort of mulligan?
1_schizo_grl Joined: Mar 15, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 14:03:13
	Of course you can start over. Maybe that is what the dream represents. :)
california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 14:04:47
	Yeah it is kinda like using the metaphor of a pheonix rising from the ashes.
1_schizo_grl Joined: Mar 15, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-09-30 14:19:03
	That's beautiful . Maybe you can write another poem. :)
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