i wrote a poem!

killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:35:18
	u know schiller?
aca6 Joined: Dec 19, '09 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:37:59
	Friedrich Schiller? I know of him but have never heard his poetry.
killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:44:13
	i wonder why xD
aca6 Joined: Dec 19, '09 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:45:56
	The fact that I can't understand it without a translation is a big hint...
killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:46:24
	yea i was being sarcastic xP
deblwk Joined: Sep 7, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:47:09
	Sounds like Wolfgang was a bit of an advocate for Gay Rights through his writings? Nice
killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:50:25
	wolfgang is his first name... so when u say wolfgang u could mean many ppl. mozarts first name was wolfgang
deblwk Joined: Sep 7, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:54:20
	ohhhh I thought you'd get it because we were just talking about him. Wolfgang von Goethe then.
killing joke Joined: Aug 31, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 14:55:56
	no i meant to say. just say goethe xP but enough bout german literature. i wanna know some good northamerican poets...
Obsidian Joined: Jan 22, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 19:36:39
	Haha, I think this one is my favorite. :P "What lurks in the shadows Is what is wrong with the world An evil without its like It is a devious herd They are everything but rational They think they are always right There are no grey zones To them it's either black or white They are a fleshly wound on Earth They bring with them catastrophy They say that they care But whatever they do is hypocrisy They may act all friendly At times they seem nice But the fact of life is That they are wolves in disguise How do we help it? This world they deovour There is no way Because they are the ones in power The sadest part is They are both you and me I wish there could be more Hope for humanity"
deblwk Joined: Sep 7, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 23:09:13
	Wow Obsidian that poem says a lot. A very real perspective. To me it is the darker perspective, but it is filled with everyday earthly realities.
Obsidian Joined: Jan 22, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 23:13:55
	Yea, that one would go under the genre dark poetry. :P The creator is a long gone member of the cutter thread, thus the "haha" in the beginning of my last post. :D If you're out there RedBeauty, come and post more good poetry. :P
Obsidian Joined: Jan 22, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-31 23:17:24
	Haha, I see now that I even copied a spelling mistake.
deblwk Joined: Sep 7, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-11-01 00:23:42
	lol
california Joined: Aug 2, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-11-01 02:11:26
	Mahatma, i have risen Concerning stirs in my heart your eyes burning in my head hoping, wishing, screaming I've been visited by you before in the night's mid hour i hear your curious whisper I lay my head down and as i sink into the linen i continue to see those eyes But i lack understanding. a story is being said of which i cannot decipher And i wonder. Are these visions or hallucinations? the iris glows releasing its flowing implications and i feel... safe I plead for the map to my destination Searching in the sea of blue and sharp green And then i know you are me and i am you Mahatma, My subconcious My prophetess The Willow's Empress.
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