Poem

ireland Joined: May 1, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-06 07:35:22
	Kori-You relly should find other ways to entertain yourself.x
Zhawq Joined: Jul 19, '10 Status: Junior User	2010-10-14 12:14:45
	This is for Psychof-iend: Fiends are good Friends are bad 'paths and Poems You must be mad!
Zhawq Joined: Jul 19, '10 Status: Junior User	2010-10-14 12:26:12
	Oh sh**! I wrote the above before I saw this: "psychopaths DO like poetry."
Ash27672 Joined: Oct 24, '10 Status: New User	2010-10-26 16:04:34
	I believe this is a sociopathic forum and I'm pretty garsh darn sure that we don't want to hear about your annoying, petty love poems. Poems are for ignorant people who would like others to think they are deep thinkers when the real deep thinkers understand that poetry is a waste of time you guys idiots.
1_schizo_grl Joined: Mar 15, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-10-26 17:53:50
	Some of us do like poetry.
blackmonster Joined: Nov 18, '10 Status: New User	2010-11-19 11:59:38
	Psychofriendd I am pretty sure you are obsessed.
Demon Joined: Dec 1, '10 Status: New User	2010-12-04 09:13:41
	Here is a poem that I wrote some time ago: The Phantom Serial Killer I'm invisible, untouchable, you don’t know who I am. They say that I am evil. Am I a woman or a man? I’m elusive, yet intrusive as I watch and wait to strike I blend in with the shadows and the darkness of the night I'm sadistic and I'm wicked and I am savage you will see I leave a trail of death behind marked with brutality To society I’m a monster who should be locked inside a cage But when I’m in the crowd I’m like an actor on a stage I display these false emotions and wear them like a mask Pretending I am friendly, while thoughts of killing you I bask You’ll think that I am innocent as I walk among these sheep But I am hunting for my prey, the vulnerable and weak Like a lion I sit and watch and quietly lay in wait Until I find the one who has sealed their deathly fate I hunt them and I stalk them and observe them day by day Until that moment comes when I can finally catch my prey I lure them and trap them and drive them gagged and bound To a place of blood-soaked earth that I call my killing ground I drag them from the car and tie them to a tree My knife is at their neck as they struggle desperately But there is no escape from this horror and this pain Cause I’m a psycho and a sadist and torture is my game It’s true fear that you will feel when you look into my eyes You will see me as a God not just a killer in disguise Your death will be my glory, the media I will feed When I leave a signatory note the cops will think they have a lead They think that they can catch me, these detectives with their guns But I’m invisible, untraceable, I am a professional, not dumb Their forensics will be useless as I never leave a trace I may even help them hunt for me while laughing in their face They judge me and they criticize, but they never really see They don’t know the truth of what’s hiding inside of me I’m not a monster. I am human. A product of abuse Releasing all my hatred on those in whom I choose People are nothing more than objects, simply cattle for the kill Killing them is pleasurable, it is my greatest thrill! There will come a time when I will show the world my face When death calls out my name, before I finally leave this place Then one day they’ll make a movie, no doubt a gruesome thriller And I’ll be immortalized forever as the phantom serial killer!
Obsidian Joined: Jan 22, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-12-04 09:18:54
	It is good writing, but the poem is boring. No highlights or twists or anything. Just descriptive.
Demon Joined: Dec 1, '10 Status: New User	2010-12-04 09:24:43
	I've found that many other people who have read it over the years very much enjoyed my poem, but I understand that not everyone is going to agree. It's meant to be descriptive. It's not actually intended as entertainment with twists and turns. What you see is what you get basically.
Demon Joined: Dec 1, '10 Status: New User	2010-12-04 09:35:47
	EDIT: Replace 'enjoyed' with 'appreciated'.
MeMyandI Joined: Apr 21, '10 Status: Junior User	2010-12-04 09:37:59
	That is more like a story then an poem. It just rhymes. like a normal poem is supposed to be rather unfollowable and able to be interprentable in different ways. in comparisment that was rather straightforwards.
Demon Joined: Dec 1, '10 Status: New User	2010-12-04 10:02:34
	A poem is a rhythmical composition designed to convey ideas, experiences and/or emotions. Being straightforward and without the need to be interpreted makes it no less of one. Not all poems are written the same way. What you enjoy or artistically appreciate comes down to individual 'taste' I believe.
Obsidian Joined: Jan 22, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-12-04 10:05:40
	I agree with Demon. I just thought that the poem would be better if it was made more exciting.
Demon Joined: Dec 1, '10 Status: New User	2010-12-04 10:06:54
	That's fair enough. Each to their own.
1_schizo_grl Joined: Mar 15, '10 Status: Senior User	2010-12-06 09:15:45
	Demon I like the poem, and thought of Hannibal, as I read it.
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